Against the Undertow of Deep Time


“I’ve cheated death!” As the negentropic field faded, Darien surveyed the lava tube. His eyes widened. How long?

“Nadine?!”

It was far too late. A magma flow had crashed through the wall untold ages ago, crushing her negentropy field. Even her bones had long since turned to dust. Thousands of years? Millions? The Pu-224 power core — half-life 80 million years — felt cool against his hand.

Climbing out of the lava tube, Darien saw waves crashing upon a barren shoreline. No advanced civilization here. No cure. No utopia. No happily ever after. Blackness pressed against his eyeballs. He gasped. There was no oxygen!

“I’ve cheated only myself.” He collapsed to the eroded shore. Salty waves washed away his tears. “You win.”

Written for Flash! Friday vol. 3-45, whose theme was Moby Dick. This story includes a man vs. nature conflict, and an overall theme of the power of nature. Image is Naufragos/Shipwrecked. CC2.0 photo by Luis Marina.

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